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Old 07-29-2007, 07:54 PM
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Just another poem of a lifestyle,hope u enjoy L&R,,Wayne,,

Freedom is Ours

Sitting here in wasted time,
Often thinking of my Ride,
And the feeling of Freedom,
With the sense of Pride

They can lock up the man,
But his heart remains free,
While riding his Harley,
The pride is easy to see,

The visions of open roads,
The smell of hot asphault,
Sounds of a roaring engine,
As the highway we assault,

In a cell eyes closed tight,
Our minds drift away,
That old feeling of Pride,
Is with us to stay,

The caress of a warm wind,
Fantasizing of our ride,
Still being locked down,
Letting our mind be the guide,

Yes, you may lock up the man,
And tear his freedom away,
But once we close our eye's,
Our freedom is here to stay.

Wayne 05
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Old 07-29-2007, 09:36 PM
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Excellent Post Wayne! :10:
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Old 07-29-2007, 09:48 PM
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Awesome post!! :motor: :10:
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Powerful stuff Wayne. Thanks again.

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That pretty much sums it up. :smile:
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thx for your comments (everyone) as when any poet write poem ,the best feeling he/she gets is from the comments , even if its good or bad ,,critisisim helps me write beer poems as I guess like everything you have to mould into the tasks so usually you go from bad-good to better,,I'm taking my PC into the shop to be upgraded ,so I;ll be leaving a couple of poems in my absence and will be back soon,as I like it here ..L&R,,Wayne
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thx for your comments (everyone) as when any poet write poem ,the best feeling he/she gets is from the comments , even if its good or bad ,,critisisim helps me write beer poems as I guess like everything you have to mould into the tasks so usually you go from bad-good to better,,I'm taking my PC into the shop to be upgraded ,so I;ll be leaving a couple of poems in my absence and will be back soon,as I like it here ..L&R,,Wayne

Cool I am getting use to reading at least one of your poems a day lol. Thanks for sharing your great work with everyone here at Hawg Zone. :smile:
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Old 07-30-2007, 07:21 PM
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its a pleasure and ,I usually write a poem when there is an issue to help someone or about a just cause for bikers or for those who are in need of some kind of support ,and I usually pull something from my site when I am not writeing for those who haven't seen them on my site,oh yeah if its raining up here I sit around and write lol,,thx again, Wayne
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GREAT WRITING..... more, more.... :wink:
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